perswasife letter

Dear Mr Weal please can I come to the XL center with you because I am really interested in technology . Also because  I would like to see what technology there is.So Mr Weal please may I come with you to the XL center.

my reveiw of the snow queen

I went to the snow queen at putney arts theater and I thought it was amazing.It was one of the best shows I have seen.I  thought all the actors were great and all the music.I also liked that in the middle of the play most of the actors changed around. I would reccomend this to people who like shows.I woulde rate this 5 stars.